I seek not the loneliness
in sheltered umbrella rain.
Nor the lightening that forks
lives only a second, then does fade away.
Far reaching touches
ebb into distant memories.
Voices a fair reminder
recording visual.
Surrender..
Author notes
Picture Credit: Solitude's Skies by Ylova Hamdan
Picture Prompt A
"I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts"
In a list
A contest entry
- Options, options and yes, some more options! =) by chilali.
900 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh wow. This is so amazing. A lovely take on the picture. Thank you so much for your entry and good luck to you
Much love
Ylova
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Thank you honey
Much love
x
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ya seek ya find ya know dis is ace
wowza I gulp
really great
gd luck 2 ya
cheers abe
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lovely, lovely
beautiful wording, emotions, depth of so many things.
Nice job!
best wishes in your contest.
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I love it sis!!! You truly did a beautiful job!!!
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Excellent take on the prompt. I love the ending sis, very softly done. A beautiful write that touched the soul, best of luck in the contest
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Brilliant Julie! I love where you took the prompt. =) You are an amazing writer, there's so much I have to learn from you and yes I do look up to you! Your work was one of the first I read on All Poetry, and it still is one of the very best I've ever read. Love it. Good luck to you in the contest.
Love always,
Alyzeh
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Voices a fair reminder
recording visual.
Surrender..
Okay.
that was easy, huh? I love the soft quiet stillness of this write, my lovely sister whom I've totally abandoned. Though some would think that a good thing
. please know I'ma headed to your page for some perusal as soon as my lids open in the morning. Hopefully this write will be the medicine I need to just get there.
Tranquil. That's the word. Surrender. Nice.
Love this, and I love you my lovely English sistergirl.
Jin
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Beautifully soft and filled with images that touch the heart... Bravo....
Ken
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a beautiful poem julie I love the last three stanzas they are so wonderful good luck inthe contest my friend
maralisa
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