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Retro-woman

Woman wearing horns of deer; stone;
wood; shell; metal; bone -
for enthusiasm: smouldering azure
for fertility: the amber fire ...
amulet for benediction:
smooth scallop of a pearly heart

Woman wearing chains of gold - linking
circles ... ring-in-ring;
friendship's quiet rosen quartz
may mend a lonely broken heart;
Kashmir sapphire's cornflower blue
oh, noble Serenity: for you!

Woman wearing Fleur-de-lys
bracelets of filigree;
for passion: Burma's ruby-red mogok
for texture: pearls of baroque ...
need purification from afar?
shield tender breasts with a polar-star!

myra

Author notes

Retro: moving from geometrical designs back to antique jewellery
Written March 5th, 2002

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 22, 2002
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    don't touch it!

    Wonderful and well written :o) Namaste'
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  • myrataal silver member
    March 5, 2002
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    Jinaki ... ^.^

  • Jinaki
    March 5, 2002
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    Ahhhhh! This is the shit! Damn! how much more poetic can one be. The descriptive words you used are magnificant!


  • myrataal silver member
    March 5, 2002
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    Thank you, tigerlilly ... glad you love it.

  • tigerlilly
    March 5, 2002
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    i love the imagery and your comparisons... so clearly seen!


  • myrataal silver member
    March 5, 2002
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    Thanks Nam! I appreciate your visits; yes, I do.


  • Nam
    March 5, 2002
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    baroque, i love that word.

    :0)

    Nam

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