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[ Call me spoiled ]

Call me spoiled
but how is it fair?
How do I have a chance
when you wont let your heart heal?
You live in the past
saying you dont want to
make the same mistake twice
but there's still pain in thoes memories
that tear at my heart and mind
they still run your future
even though they're in the past
Your say they're nothing
that they don't influence a thing
but I know that they are
The ghosts in every corner
The skeletons in your closet
and even the mosters under your bed
They are the nightmares that wont let go
They are the ones
that keep you looking back
and the reason
you dont want to look ahead

Author notes

This poem is probably far from being one of my best... but I had to get these things out of my mind and off my chest.

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  • bluecollarlove
    November 22, 2008

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    I think everyone carries monsters that influence there lives.I think guilt is the worst.I do know where you are coming from.


    • Kristin Melissa
      November 22, 2008
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      the poem was to my boyfriend... i was trying to get him to let go of his past relationships.... They are a big thing with him and at times it hurts because he talks so much about them. The things they did wrong and then at times just random things about them. I understand that there will always be memories.... but they hurt so bad!! I'm sorry you probably dont want to hear all this but thanks for commenting


  • Guerrero
    November 17, 2008
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    great job.. this is so easily relatable.. nice job.