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Perhaps

Perhaps
there is a preordained
plan
to the lives
of every man

Or perhaps
we don't understand
that the path we choose
is in our own hands

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  • going nowhere
    November 18, 2008
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    makes one ponder... well done with the prompt. thank you


  • oceanbluize
    November 17, 2008

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    very true...and all too often we think it's left strictly to fate. Foolishness? I think you answered the question.
    wow, good luck!