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Salvation by Love

Before I met you,
my heart was frozen.

I cared for and loved no one but myself.
Distrust was all I could feel towards people.

But you shattered the layer of ice that covered my heart.
You are a blessing sent down from heaven.

From where the stars dwell...

All around you,
miracles occur.

You are a mystery to me...

My love for you is never ending like an eternal stream  
and I desire your love more than anything.

Day in and day out,
praying to the Lord up above...

Praying that one day,
you will feel for me, as I feel for you.

Today,
I love you.
And I will forever more.

Author notes

"I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts"

Option 3: Word Bank.
Life
Love
Miracle
Today
Star
Stream
Eternal
Mystery
Desire
Heart

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  • chilali
    December 10, 2008
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    I loved this. It was simple and so very tender. I also love how you made a great use of the words provided. A great background that compliments the sentiments in your poem. Thank you for entering and good luck to you

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Rhythm Child
    November 30, 2008

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    brilliant take on the wordbank
    i think the background complimented the poem brilliantly


  • oceanbluize
    November 19, 2008

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    very tender write...i wish a woman would write sweetness such as this to ME!!!!!!!!! beautiful with fluid thought...do not let the pen become stagnant...it would be a loss to us all. "Today,
    I love you.
    And I will forever more." *sighs*


  • MD Masroor
    November 18, 2008

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    Wow! Such a beautiful poem written in such a beautiful manner, and a great imagery that makes one think really deep. I loved the structure, and the how the image steals one'smind and puts them in a whole new world.Good luck in the contest!


  • Scyphon
    November 18, 2008

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    A very beautiful poem, the title was perfect for it too. The heart saved from its frozen chambers, free to love, as it chose to love for an eternity.
    I cared for and loved no one but myself.
    Distrust was all I could feel towards people.
    -Nice to see people freed from this, able to trust and love, giving a chance for hope and happiness.
    Well done, best of luck to you

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