It is possible
that the syllables
emanating from his heart
recited true poetry
only for her,
until the dictionary
of his intentions
added a new word~
camouflage.
Author notes
prompt: perhaps
A contest entry
- perhaps by going nowhere.
1400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Clever dear! and Harrisham Brilliant/
I thnk there are many who can relate to this
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WHOA... my mouth is open in awe... wonderful! thank you
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I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem.
Thanks a lot.
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whoa! that is a thought of abysmal proportions...Holy crap! Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks a lot.
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Ouch! True colors often are not seen until it is too late for a heart that loves...very creative metaphor and deep feelings...great closing...
best to you!
mystic
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Thanks a lot my friend.
Your wonderful comments are very appreciated.
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ah. Does this perhaps indicate his confusion over two women? Or his true love for one and an act for the other? Nicely written though. very powerful.
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Well, it is about infidelity. It may be two women or even more...and he is not true to anyone.
Thanks for your comments. They are very appreciated.
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