silence smiles
eyes sparkle the proposition
lingering momentarily before flutter
face warming with tingled blush
want tempered with the rush to flee
only to peer around corners
for second looks
Author notes
prompt: perhaps
30 words or less
no erotica
no vulgarity
(30 words)
A contest entry
- perhaps by going nowhere.
1400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow... wonderful use of the prompt and subtle. great job. thank you
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THank you. So pleased you enjoyed this one. Glad for the HM on this one.
~Pamela
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exactly 30 too. wow, mine as well. But I didn't want to stop. lol
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very soft and delicate. yet the ending has mysticism. Omg the judge bless her heart...is going to have fun with this contest. Great Job! good luck!
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How wonderfully soft and lovely...very creative with sweet metaphor and imagery...wonderfully done...
best,
mystic
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MMM Perhaps you might win LOL?
PERHAPS?
I counted thirty words, how the heck do you restrict your heart to numbers?
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