Looking upward,
rapt by God's starlit sky,
I know His return is imminent.
I can't help but imagine,
...perhaps tonight?
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A contest entry
- perhaps by going nowhere.
1400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 8 entries
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Ah..tonight..this makes me to smile..and very hopeful as well..why not at once..I believe HE is always here,there, qnd everywhere..a great work..
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Yes, I imagine His soon return any time now. I suppose a lot of people do with the turmoil in the middle east and all. A lovely expression of truth.
God bless.
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Beautiful and the image is well penned
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you have put this together so beautifully
faithful and precious
God bless you my friend
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It'll be in our lifetime is what I'm thinking. Your words make me smile and I feel like a little girl just standing out back at night, looking up and repeating your words as if they were mine.
Totally lovely~
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Me too girl, me too!!!!
Come Lord Jesus!!
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This is a beautiful piece and the background as well as the picture when combined with the imagery in your words makes for an amazing poem.
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wow... great job and made me pretty much say out loud... whoa. haha... thank you
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oh my word...I'm speechless...and that's hard for me to be lol. spellbinding beauty...wow! wowieee! shiney for sure I bet...and i thought mine was good. good luck!
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I haven't been on in a while and I can't imagine what I have missed in the meantime. But as usual, this is great. Wishing you the best in this contest, even if you don't need it. How very thoughtful you make us all feel. Excellent.
Joan
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