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Black Widow

Don't remember
Quite when
My masochistic side
Set in
The serial killer
Deep within

Maybe
Oh, baby
Just maybe
It was when
He raped me
Took me
Pinned me
Choked me

Slid the blade across my body
Sent shivers down my spine
Woke up
A demon inside

I fought
Screamed
Twitched
Moaned

Ripped that blade from his grip
And sliced his throat

The spurt of blood
From his neck
Made my eyes turn
The demon
Want more

And so I left...

I leaned up against
A stone wall in the ally
My heel pressed against the wall
Waiting for my next victim
The next one who would have me

Smiling dolefully at the next stranger
He caught my gaze
My wicked
Omniescent
Cold gaze

I saw him shiver
Not from the cold
Look deep into my eyes
Deep into my
Soul
My non-existent soul

I smiled again
As he looked me over
Took my hand
And bent me over

My demon awoke
As he started to choke me
Pressed me against the wall

And the demon screamed
I reached for my dagger, hidden beneath my skirt
And stabbed the poor bastard
Right where it hurt

He screamed
I smiled
My malicious
Maniacal grin
As I licked the blood up
I began to sing

I calmed him
Soothed him
Told him, it'd be okay

Lifted up his shirt
As he began to pray
I slid the blade across his chest
Watch the beads of blood start to form
Lapped it up slowly
Enraptured he was

I plunged deep
Deep into his heart
Heard him cry
As I whispered
My sweet goodbye

I really have no reason
Unless you truly think
I do

Maybe, it was 'cause
I was beaten and bruised
Torn apart
Stitched back together
By the demon in my mind

So,
Fella's beware
The Black Widow
Haunts the allies
Looking for the next prey
To succumb to her
Destructive desires


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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    November 17, 2008
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    Hmmm...

    This is fantastic.

    I absolutely loved this story. I would dread meeting this black widow in a dark alley..lol

    Well done!

    BTW, I hope there is more to come for this killer.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


    • SatuRn Grotesk
      November 18, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment....I was trying to base it off of Bloody Kisses

      "I love you when
      The blood's smeared across your chest

      I love you when
      The razorblade cuts your flesh"



      SatuRn