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Will We.....?

 

 

I awake to the soft sound
of slender fingers playing the strings
as though caressing my soul
with his sensual music

each new phrase or run of notes
frees my mind to seek words
to express my feelings

he smiles, stops and kisses me
slowly, deliberately, knowingly


musician and poet -
a match of perfection
our muses melding
long before our bodies


he hands me the diary
not used for it’s true purpose
but as a notebook
each page filled with love

each new day, a verse, a poem
or just our thoughts
captured for all time…


I gaze into the snow globe,
a scene immortalised in plastic,
fir trees, snowmen, skaters,
I shake vigorously
and watch the snow fall,
then glance up and see
bright blue eyes smile
from a deeply tanned face
and wonder


‘will we ever see snow again?’

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt...Stranded on a tropical island

Three items chosen

1. Guitar
2. A blank leather bound diary
3. A snowglobe

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    Thanks for the entry, I enjoyed reading it.

    All the best,
    mj.


  • arafura gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Very good. I love it!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Aww.. I want to be stranded just like that!!
    Gorgeous!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    A series of vignettes and musings, the sort of apparently inconsequential thoughts that would dominate in such a situation, lovely poetry