Cloud in essence above me swirls
Thunderstorm clashing ready to explode
Walking the streets in the cold night
The rain pours upon my very soul
Reaching the end of the road
I stare into the emptiness
Ready for no comfort to come
Snatched into a now appearing door
Held tight in arms soon recognized
A voice comes to my ears softly
'It's ok' the voice spoke gently
In tears I said 'The sky is over us'
Holding me closer, I heard his heart
'Nothing can harm you my dear'
'The clouds can form, the winds blow down'
'The storm may strike our very ground'
'No matter what will happen'
'This storm will pass us by'
'Just remember, never forget'
'Your father will protect you'
Author notes
g.) The Sky Is Over (Serj Tankian)
5.) I will be traveling to see my father. So pen me some beautiful poetry about parents. A father in particular.
(Have a safe and happy trip Ylova, and remember, Dad is always there to look out for you)
"I've got a lovely bunch of coconuts" bc you know I do, lol
I love that song... all of his songs.
pic by floridalightning.com
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A contest entry
- Options, options and yes, some more options! =) by chilali.
900 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? And if you dont like it, go away... need to correct a typo? message me, please leave it out of comments
Comments
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This is an incredible write. It really stands out. I love the image you've posted as well. Thank you so much for your entry and good luck.
Much love
Ylova
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Beautiful poem.
Good luck in the contest.
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Aww this is beautiful and such a touching peice. I liked your flow in this. You did a great job, thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
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Such a touching, sweet write. Good luck in the contest!
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What a great read , well written ! Thanks for sharing
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