lightening strikes
a thunderstorm
crashing waves inside
the sunshine that lead the way
runs away to hide
the flame of hope
perceived as weak
against the rushing tide
a beacon of existing light
that will not be denied.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by AliceinPoetryLand.
1200 points, ended November 17, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow. short yet very impactful. enjoyed the read, and i love the imagery here. wow, your words painted such vivid and powerful images in mind great job, and congratz on the bronze. well deserved
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Congrats on the bronze. I thought this was an amazing piece with great emotion. Wonderful,
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Wonderful emotion and fantastic imagery laid out for the trials of faith that surface. Congatulations on the Bronze!
Best to you and good to see you again!
Mouser
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Excellent, Rosemarie! great to see you back writing again and a bronze trophy too! yer back with a bang, great stuff!
Alex.
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Thank you for your kind words my friend. It feels good to write again.
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Wonderful! Love it! Thanks so much for your entry
Gaylene
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Beautiful imagery emerges from your words in this excellent poem.....mal
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Thank you for your words of encouragement,
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Rosemarie, This is a great poem! Good luck in the contest
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