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Numb

As the cold bites my cheeks
And clings to my hair,
I stare at the ground
And my thoughts race.
I think of my frustration,
My loneliness,
My happiness,
My need for a break.
But my thoughts always return
To you.
When will I see you again?
When will you hold me in your arms
And promise to never let go?
When will our lips touch once again?
When will you protect me
From the cold, trying
To make me forever
Numb?

Author notes

I've had this sitting in the back of my notebook for a couple weeks now. It's not that good, but I've been having trouble writing, as you can probably tell.

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  • SilkyRedRose
    December 4, 2008

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    this is a very good poem.
    you will find someone who will make those questions go away and make you happy..
    you will never feel numb.
    keep writing.!!


  • lovesky
    November 17, 2008

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    Glad you did something with this idea from your notebook because it has turned out great. Longing for reunited love, Great write


  • infernalxfidelity
    November 17, 2008

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    hmmmm...this is pretty good for something that's been taking the backseat ride of a notebook. i liked it a lot. and i'm sure you'll find someone special to thaw you out. :]

    <3