Magnetic shadows,
Never a mystery.
Glass oceans,
Constantly changing.
As the tides roll in,
I watch them in your eyes.
Hearts beat fast,
Hands move slow.
In the lights,
Basking in the afterglow.
This is real and now I know,
I can see it in your eyes.
So quiet,
Yet still emotional.
Two souls
Have found one home.
You never say,
You never speak the words,
But I know it's there,
Because it is clear in your eyes.
A contest entry
- What Are You Feeling? by Simone Brooklyn.
1050 points, ended November 25, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great job! This poem really showed me how you felt, because I have felt it, too. It's easy to relate to, and it flows well. Good job, and good luck in my contest.
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wow, this is nice, i don't know why but reading it you kind of gain this calm feeling, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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