A breeze like knock
with just a trembling finger
and the door opened like the opening thighs
revealing the sinful hostess
wearing a moonlit smile and a see through black robe
with all treasures
that were to be spent lavishly on the invited guest
the breathing fish seemed moving splendidly in the water
Guiding me to her soft bed
she stood up like a goddess
and with two fingers showed a glimpse of what was in store for her guest
She laid me down
came on top
almost pinning me to her bed
with her knees in between my perspiring thighs
and her sweet fangs digging softly in my shoulder
in such a subtle manner that i daydreamed of kinky angels, lustful goddesses, and gory vampires
She took my hands
and put them on her heaving breasts
i measured the succulent curves with my warm pink palms
she opened my buttons
made my pigeons bare
to be massaged by her fragrant breath
She stood
while i lay on naked bed watching
she dropped her flimsy robe with a slight jerk of her sexy shoulders
she kept standind for a while -- naked for me --
allowing my hungry gaze devoring her naked statue like figure
Then she slowly bent on me
her deliciously throbbing limbs starting touching my naked body
i felt her supple breasts caressing mine
our proud nipples kissing and nibbling
growing sweeter like honey and harder like small pink rocks
Her mesmerizind gaze was holding her guest hostage
i could watch her bare limbs glistening with dewy drops
my trembling body was arching with illicit desires
i was listening to her shameless whispers
the sweet moans -- apparently the melancholy notes of Keats -- were trickling out of my lips
my mouth waiting for her delicious juices
which i eventually managed to taste
while my tongue succeeded in exploring the potentials of her sweetest fruit
and while she pushed her tongue through my eagerly waiting lips
both the host and the guest made each other drink their sweetest nectar that they could offer to a hungry mouth
I laughed
and cried
and wept
in ecstasy
When fully spent
i slept amidst those gorgeous thighs
dreaming of two Olympic goddesses -- copulating --
Author notes
You cannot disobey a mistress even if you have to go to a hotel room as her invited guest. Maybe you can. I cant.
What did you think
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Hmmm sleeping between gorgeous thighs...I've done like , and dreaming of two Olympic goddesses-- copulating--I've done that too. Great write!
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YOU DID IT AGAIN YOU NAUGHTY GIRL!!
HOW DO YOU THINK OF SUCH SPLENDID IMAGERY!!
I MEAN WOW
VERY HOT, EXOTIC, EROTIC, EVERYTHING
it feels more like a story than a poem so.. i'd remove the verse and ASK FOR MORE DETAIL
good night my sweet.. i wanna read more..
Nooni
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omg!
wow this poem is really hott I really enjoyed reading it
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This is absolutly brilliant.please write more poems like these cuz they're fuckin awesome.after readin it i was totally ready to call my 'friend' up to act this out for ourselves=p x x x x x
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omg you are such a good writer!
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An interesting write. I really enjoyed how it was kept within the bounds of eroticism and never strayed into the realm of porno.
Well penned!! Excellant!!!!
As those soft pink lips parted the trembling tongue did slowly enter to feast, nay to devour the exquisitness set before it.
She supped from the gold rimmed cup, drank the ambrosia to the last drop.
Then vivaciously did she lick and sup upon the honey-dew with eager and wanton desire
Till at last satiated she slept till morn.
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Jesus christ.
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fangs to blame
did i corrupt u 2 much hun
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OH WOW
....i'm not sure what to say other than I WANT THAT....but with a guy...hell right now i don't even care...i'd take a girl.
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silhouette fairy
thx hun 4 this special concession 4 me. i'd love to be taken
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This is a wonderful write from you hon! I enjoyed this read
She took my hands
and put them on her heaving breasts
i measured the succulent curves with my warm pink palms
she opened my buttons
made my pigeons bare
to be massaged by her fragrant breath
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hotchocolate
its an honor. i've to learn a lot from u mistress
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holy crap love!
the best write ive seen from you. absolutely stunning work!
mucho love,
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shattering gypsy
the best r yet to cum ; its just the start
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like a page from love novel
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Verlecia
if u agree to be its main character i can even write a full fledged erotic novel -- lol
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pure ecstasy
This makes me want to switch over to the other side!!!
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alaskanamber
who's stopping u from doing so? ure most welcome
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i have never had a mistress, i don't think any one can truly control me, but i do like this poem that you have written here, keep it flowing
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Disturbed Prodigy
perhaps u prefer to be a master
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well expressed. Best of luck in the contest.
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Such a vacation paradise, one would never have to leave the room
breakfast, lunch and dinner in bed, with so many desserts....my mouth waiting for her delicious juices
which I eventually managed to taste
while my tongue succeeded in exploring the potentials of her sweetest fruit...exquisite write~~~Artis
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artis
ure 2 late to be added to the activity -
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never too late, there is always room for three more O's ~~~~LOL
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Artis
three more O's? whats that?
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Outstanding and vivid for such a young mind...Do not let that pen rest...EVER!!!
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oceanbluize
ok NEVER
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Very stimulating and tasty write here! I really like this. Keep writing!
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soul survivor
stimulating? happy to hear that
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