Life wait for her
outside the hollowed walls.
Under a deep blue sky,
she feel the wind brush
her skin for the first time.
Under his love,
she found it breathe.
The light of the
sun warms her cold flesh,
as he feels freed from
the bonds of a stone heart.
Her world,
once an eternal
midnight was broken.
With its death,
she was reborn.
Like a star,
that faded into the night,
only to once again re-ignite.
Author notes
I took
Prompt 1
Solitude by ~liquitine
Song title: b.) The End Where I Begin ( The Script)
and the word bank
Life
Love
Star
Eternal
Light
Blue
Midnight
Heart
Stone
Cold
Breathe
Broken
Death
I tried i hope you enjoy it
A contest entry
- Options, options and yes, some more options! =) by chilali.
900 points, ended December 11, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow wonderful dark imagery and excellent flow ..great write for the restrictions of words in word bank...a well deserved reward for your efforts dear poet...one little typo ...line 4 ...feel s/b Feels?
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I love the mix of options. This was a great write. And yes, I did enjoy it very much. Thank you for entering and good luck to you
Much love
Ylova
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I like the circle here, and the rebirth. Good use of all the prompts, well done, good luck in the contest!
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loved it
great job imnot that good yet but maybe some day i will be keep up the flow
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Powerful write. I liked the part near the end about being reborn. It seems like the cycle from night to day time can seem like a rebirth almost. Like, how each beginning of a day can be a new beginning. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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Awesome, love the sensuality here, beautifully done as always hun. You did more than try here! Wicked work, good luck in the contest
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