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True Love & Laughter

Looking past
excessivness
of beauty.

Looking past
societal exceptedness.

Looking past
cramped silver quarters.

It is hard to ask
again
for feelings.

Looking for warmth
behind touch in adulthood.

Looking for warmth
in her eyes
deep inside of me.

Looking for warmth
behind the window
of...

        True love
              &
        Laughter

Author notes

On the front of my brain while trying to stare into the tv. It was there the whole time to ask again. Is there love for me? (Carpenter jeans by the river and horny antlers) Makes me laugh.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    aaww..

    my friend I see you're still on that journey..just take one step at a time, you'll be fine.
    good thoughts here big guy.


  • lovesky
    November 17, 2008
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    Nice work put together really well