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10 months

10 months have gone by & look how things have changed.
We have all lost so much, we thought we had all figured out how to play this little game.
But here I sit questioning everything I thought to be true.
Growing close to the end of my dead end street, one constant being missing you.
I sometimes feel envious of the choice you made,
All I really want is for these problems and bad feelings to fade.
I'm frightened that my dreams will start becoming real.
I bleed even more when I think I'm starting to heal.

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  • xXx Dark Poet xXx
    November 19, 2008
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    this was good but i thought the other one i read was better. ur better at poetry than me.


  • meggie94x
    November 17, 2008

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    very good. but you are NOT leaving me here alone. NO WAY NO HOW. If you go, i go...its as simple as that...