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Markings

Handing me the chicken
seeing the marks
along lines
of...

        Innocent pained flesh.

Four cuts
in plain view
bandaid remains
ripped off
underside sight.

Dead eyes
of work
mechanical motions
just to get out
of the chaos.

Dyed is the color
of the hidden
no refection of...

        A past unforgotten.

Smiling through saddness
I said ...

            Thanks,
              you do a nice job -

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Either on her own, In a house or in a wrong type of home. I never would have recognized the marks before. Not sure I like recognizing them now. Makes me sad.

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  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    hhmmm..

    sounds like there might be something not right..will you be questioning where the marks came from? I hope she confides in you if she needs help..this feels..sad.