Through natures canopy I see heaven smiling, bright and beautiful to light your weary path.
Ember of Eternal Love placed with care to guide and inspire throughout the ages.
A contest entry
- Fully by Mari Goes.
1300 points, ended November 22, 2008, 17 entries
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It's short but it does express in those brief lines the power of the moon upon us. And indeed the moon does inspire us. Thank you for this lovely lines
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Thanks for the comment, much appreciated
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This is really deep! Through nature you see heaven. There is no other way to see nature I think, you are right! May the ember of Eternal Love keep buring! Well done!
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Hey there hugger, many thanks for your kind comment, I really appreciate your input, have a really great day
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