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it’s psychologically impossible

1,2,3 STOP
Shoot
Jump
Run
Tranquillity travels in time
At it’s own pace
Fate-there’s no stopping now
You take the plunge
You risk a life
It’s psychologically impossible

You think
You stare
you want his life
in return for your love, your soul
you want life before he was here
he betrayed with bloody hands
Now it’s your turn to play the vamp
Switch of the lights, it’s easier that way
you won’t see his lying face
but wait it’s here it’s still there
the strangest feeling on earth…don’t you remember?
he’s here and you don’t want him gone
you do or you don’t
you do
you don’t
don’t you?
You silly fool
You thought you could?
Noooo
you couldn’t
Not when, you feel this way
you can’t touch him
You still love him
It’s psychologically impossible

secret kisses
you found it impossible
you love so much it hurts
young girl
don’t kill the love
but sorries don’t cut it
the memories, there 
the fresh flesh wound
still aches?
but does she love?
Surely love concurs all?
No? then shoot, shoot, shoot
Shoot
It’s psychologically impossible

Pull the trigger
Send the goodbye
Cut the cord…
The gun trembles in your hands
It falls to the floor
It’s psychologically impossible, you see

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    very nice poem here i enjoyed how you made this poem seem like a fucked up out its mind type of write very good good luck in the contest