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Ebony Pain

Romance in its afternoon, lays claim to a bleeding heart,
Pricked by the thorns of a dark dead rose.
Left bereft of tenderness, and the sweet taste of love,
It hardens, like ebony, sinking into a lost soul.
Deeper it falls, down into the well of despair.
Yet at the top of the well stands a shadow
Within its hands the rope of hope.
Now the heart must decide,
To live or die.

Author notes

After seeing a picture of a black rose, on the anniversay of my partner moving back to the states, I wrote this.

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