Memories

When the burning sun sets,
the memories are set free -

and tomorrow will never ever come,
to set your soul free.

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Prompt: "Tomorrow turned into yesterday" - Nevermore
Word limit: 21, 21 used

Please tell me what you think

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Disturbed Prodigy
November 25, 2008
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you are truly amazing princess, one of a kind and this poem shows that, keep it flowing,sis of mine
Grateful
November 25, 2008

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deep meaning into few words can, at its best, produce a sublime literary experience...I enjoyed it....great job

all the best...
Maxboy
November 20, 2008

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Very good take on the prompt, it says a lot for so few words.

Good One
daviscth
November 17, 2008

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This is a great response to the prompt you used!!! You really made the word limit work for you dear. I love it.
chilali
November 17, 2008

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WOW! See? This should have been there while I was judging. You would have definitely gotten a shiny!! Hmph! Amazing. I loved it and thank youu! I am working on the contest now
- Meroza
  November 17, 2008
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  Right, it ain't all that good
- - chilali
    November 17, 2008
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    YES! It is! So hush woman!!!
  - - Meroza
      November 17, 2008
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      mph!
luna-midnight
November 17, 2008

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ooohhh, love the flow, placement, and sound, its awesome ^_^
kee writing, sissy, love you ♥
- Meroza
  November 17, 2008
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  Naaw, thank you sissy ^_^
chilali
November 17, 2008
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I'll try to have fun Thank youu! Hehe. I am very sorry but I am going to have to judge and close this contest without your entry!
- Meroza
  November 17, 2008
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  The poem is done now, I am sorry I coudn't hold the deadline and of course I'll enter your big contest when you return. I wish you the best of luck over there and I'll be thinking of you ^_^