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So I Say Goodbye ( Song lyrics )

Love walked down a winding road
to a place inside my head
we walked the road together
now I walk alone, instead.                                 

So I say goodbye
not with a tear but with a kiss
a kiss for the memory
that walks inside me still.
I hold on to the memory as I once held your hand.

One day maybe our paths will cross
we'll talk about old times
we'll both pretend we care no more
hiding behind false laughter.
                                 
So I say goodbye
not with a tear but with a kiss
a kiss for the memory
that walks inside me still.
I hold on to the memory as I once held your hand.

Feelings inside us never really die
they just find a quiet room and lock the door
they sit in the darknes waiting
maybe one day I’ll find the key.                   

So I say goodbye
not with a tear but with a kiss
a kiss for the memory
that walks inside me still.
I hold on to the memory as I once held your hand.


                         

                               
                             

Author notes

Second Prompt~ Goodbye: Saving Able (Song from my playlist which you will find on my page)


I'm really not sure about this. As your prompt is a song I've attempted to write a song lyric based on a similar sentiment. I've never attempted writing lyrics before ( as you can probably tell ) but I didn't want to give you 3 poems.

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  • Angelflower
    December 11, 2008

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    wow, for this being your first "lyrical" write you really did an amazing job, I truly loved this.. The emotion was intense and something that I can so relate to... Thank you very much for sharing, best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    You've never written a lyric before? Wow I find that hard to believe given this fine example, so sad and beautiful. Best to you in the contest