Beauty trickled
ebony sky
Turning day's softness,
silver cold
Stars lift,
heavens
Reminiscing
ancient memoirs,
"And I wonder..
what tomorrow holds"
Author notes
Prompt: "Tomorrow turned into yesterday" - Nevermore
21 words, 30 minutes.
Eeekh. Quickies scare me....
In a list
A contest entry
- Anyone up for an afternoon quickie? #2 by chilali.
550 points, ended November 17, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options!!!! Anything goes. by Jaffa-.
550 points, ended December 10, 2008, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really liked this. I thought it was really lovely. Beautiful description. Great, well done and good luck.
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Beautiful! I can't pick out my favourite lines because I love them all. Well done
Mariana
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Thoughts on watching the cast sky with stars.....love that feeling..
Beautifully captured!
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Lovely!!
I enjoyed this read. Well done.
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Oh, exquisite…like masterful brush strokes.
mj.
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Looking at your comments here you have some of the best nodding in approval.
Well done,
Buddy
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This is an amazingly beautiful and original poem about daybreak. I am really impressed. I can learn so much from you.
Love,
Amera♥
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It's good.
Just a few words and phrases invoke some beautiful pictures. Good choice of wording. I love the qoute at the end.
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This write has a very celestial atmosphere. Quickies tend to scare me too, but you've done wonderfully.
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wow....this is awesome
hehehehe. i really liked this alot
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I often wonder too.. then it passes and nothing much seems to have changed!
Nicely done hun
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This i a Marvel Alyzeh,
I was left pondering on this for awhile,
but i seeeeeeeeee
Excellent job here
All the best to you in the contest
Ken
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Why do quickies scare you? You do so well with them! I can tell that just by reading this piece. This was an amazing take on the prompt. Brilliantly penned. You've got the words silver cold. Hehe. I was actually thinking of putting the prompt as "silver cold rain" before I chose this one instead! Hehehe. Funny! But yes, This was an amazing entery into the contest. Thank you for entering And good luck to you!
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A thoughtful piece of imagery spoken in so few words. Reveling in the moments of what was and what is. Best wishes in the contest!
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So beautiful, you left me with the biggest of sighs, this will do beautifully. Best to you in the contest
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A ponderous poem ...
reflective in its wait. Well done!
Love
Myra
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