within sorrow i've fallen
drowned within my own tears
clinging to the illusion
i still hold the key to your heart
there is little comfort
to be found within my confusion
wedding gowns of lace and silk
another figment of my imagination
ashamed and trapped
within your betrayal and lies
i sink even further
love has withered and died
A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 25 by kiwigirljacks.
700 points, ended November 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So sad when love withers as such and we are left with confusion! Nicely done.
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love is sad
sometimes......there is so many ups and downs......and sometimes it just fades away.....leaving behind not even a traces it once exsisted at all......thats the worst time of it all
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"love has withered and died" sad
Great take on the prompt. loved how you portrayed a background for the pic. love it
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thank you
i'm glad you enjoyed it......always good to get such great feed back.....
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wittered I think you may mean withered? Betrayals and lies will always end a relationship. An excellent take. Thanks for entering and good luck
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opps
yeah it was withered......thank you for picking that up......and for the comment and kind words
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