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his golden heart i seek...

 

 

Finally alone,

bathed in moonlights

irridescent dusk.

Slips the woman

outward from within…

casting her first soulful wish.

 

“Deliver unto me,

the love of my fearless heart”

 

Though, I will not…

let him sip easily

into my mind of thoughts.

 

A glimpse will he behold,

of  my tender hope, ambitions,

and passionate of dreams.

 

Give unto him…

a spirit of sunrise might,

in order that our love will rise not fade

in the dawn of mornings truthful light.

 

“Scar his heart with patience”

to await the lavishing reward

of our flesh,

boldly feasting, united,

uplifted beyond conceived.

 

This is my tender wish,

sweet iridescent moon,

to longingly fulfill

the quiet moments of my life.

 

To cherish him,eternal,

as a bold and fearless heart,

until, my final breath.

 

Bathed, am I, in moonlight’s

irreisdescent dusk,

to help him see and understand.

His golden heart I seek.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 artistry of "the moon" by lunaya wolf,

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Author notes

contest prompt: twelve steps until my bones turn into gold.

I'm going to be very brave, and share with you a conversation,
that a tender poetess of bold heart and might shared with me
regarding the love she has carefully thought out, and my goodness
won't we all...be green with envy when she finds this worthy man!


"I just feel that when the man who's
supposed to be mine comes my way,
he will fight to be by my side. I will not
let him in easily, share my every thought
and desire, secret hope and ambitions, dreams
that fade into the early morning when the
first of the words fade on morning breath.

He will be the one: I may not know it, but I
will resist with everything, and if he finds his
way in patiently, lavishing all my fighting,
enjoying the moments of quiet between us,
and cherishing the moments in which I do let him see
a brief glimpse of him....
THEN I will know. As I will have always.
As he will have always.

And then we will be happy. There will be days
when we don't agree, but that doesn't mean his
embraces will be unwelcome or his kisses
unrequited or even the bed cold and awkward.
We will be content and accept the things we
cannot change, mold our lives to the best of
our abilities and love one another as ourselves...
beyond anything we can conceive...."

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  • ajocean silver member
    September 8
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    triumphant


  • Swan song gold member
    December 28, 2008
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    I like this one!!!! excellent !!! congrats on the silver


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    it speaks for itself ... no comment will do it justice


  • JinSays gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Let me first say this is the prettiest, most soul-moving piece I've read today. The poem you've written is absolutely beautiful. the conversation you were thoughtful enough to add in your AN is so breathtakingly sweet and truthful and raw, I'm just stunned. How can we call ourselves poets if we thought about love otherwise? I am in awe of the talent you've poured forth here, and so inspired to push aside the bitterness I feel towards love, and run screaming into it's arms, promising loyalty forever.
    This write has given me pause in my day, and a look at love-uncensored, un-embittered,
    and in clear un-cynical focus.
    fantastic Poetess,
    Best wishes,
    jin


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 17, 2008
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    Well done, speaking the language of love poetically...good luck in this contest lol


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 17, 2008

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    this was something my friend a beauiful write in it own, that is what i liked about it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • lunarlunacy
    November 17, 2008
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    Beautiful write.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    Beautiful poem.

    I like the notes.

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