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Clashing!

Yell and scream at you is what I dream to do
Or just be nicer as I swear it grates on you
Up and down like a see-saw; they think I have BPD (I think they got you wrong!)

Another dig; Now what more
Really; why is it that you always look down
Even though with everyone else, you never seem to frown

All you seem to do is criticise me, feeling invalidated

She's not even in charge but over rules the senior
Have it of been me- I'm sure you would have had something to say
Automatically you seem to have hated me
Releasing your venom at every opportunity
Keep on clashing is what we will always do

                            (why should I bother to attempt to please you?)

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number 5- WRATH

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Automatically you seem to have hated me
    Releasing your venom at every opportunity.

    You even started using the asides at the bottom!! It's a me thing.
    Think I may have rubbed off on you!!
    LOL!!

    Nice write girly... and well done for puting your option in...