Take me back in time
To where my life made sense
Before it had to end
Everywhere I turn I see you
Everywhere I go, you are there
Each time my image crosses your eyes
Do you even stop, do you ask why
Do tears ball up
Do they fall as you cry
Writing this now, I see your face
The choice I made
My desicion, my mistake
Here I go again
Thinking that I could have changed fate
By the time I had a chance, it was too late
Months after that fateful day
You asked if I would take a chance
And change what I had made
I regret now
That I told you no
If I had only known, what I now know
Don't correct my grammer, or say " I really liked this" I want a comment that tells me about you.
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I really liked this... WAIT THERE'S MORE!!!! I love the emotion it provoked, I love your choice in words, I really think that you had a lot of thoughts in your head, I do think that you could expand this quite a bit... you know that there is always room for expansion. I really like the end, but I think you could put more in the middle, I haven't been thinking much about writing, because I have been working on my guitar A LOT lately. I miss reading what you write!!! E-mail me if you write more stuff because I really want to read more, you know how I am I read everything, with difficulty, but I still read it. Well, write me back please!
Yours Truly,
Alix Maria
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