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Basking in Silence

Like the fallen leaves in the autumn
Silence is golden
I feel peace

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  • Rala
    February 28

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    I love it!

    I love writing poems about autumn. I realy love the simile "Like the fallen leaves in the autumn Silence is golden." You've taken an old idea, but wrote it in a new and creative way, great job!


  • zatil
    November 28, 2008
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    Thanks! That is what I wanted to achieve when ppl read my poem


  • Sashaness
    November 16, 2008

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    I feel peaceful reading of your peace! Actually your poem is very peacful. Your brievty encourages it. Well done.