Sour thoughts enter my mind as soon as I see a girl like her
Kind thoughts of how beautiful you are- nope I can't; I just fretter
Insane how I can be so angry at her when I do not know the girl
Never am I going to be that! A size zero!
Never am I going to be as stunning...oh arn't you the hero!
Yell at you....is what I really want to do
Bonny and looking oh so happy and wonderful
I bet you are suffering inside from starving yourself
Tragically I really hope you are; as I look like santa's elf!
Clenching my teeth as I walk past; so I do not say a rude remark
Howling inside to be just like you are; winning whilst fighting the dark
Author notes
Number six- ENVY
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In a list
A contest entry
- Seven Sins. by Walking Oxymoron.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - mirror mirror on the wall, whose the fattest of them all by nobodys-girl.
1500 points, ended February 3, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hate! Prewrite's allowed by Ami.
550 points, ended July 12, 86 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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'Never am I going to be that! A size zero!
Never am I going to be as stunning...oh arn't you the hero! '
I really like this part.
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I remember this one I like it!
Thank you so much for entering my contest
And Good luck! -♥Amy♥
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I remember this one I like it!
Thank you so much for entering my contest
And Good luck! -♥Amy♥
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..This was Awesome..
I Hate being skinny I'm only 98 lbs Lmao..
I dress like a freak and Everyone is always like
You should where mini skirts and half shirts and
I always say hell no I'm to skinny and either way I wouldn't where that stuff But I honestly liked this
I Think you might like my lyric Hollywood girl,
Check it out if you get the chance
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5269269
Off to read more of your stuff -♥Amanda♥
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Great write sweety.... You are very talented with your words...Oh and great acrostic!
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i love this! i always get so jealous when i see skinny girls. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Thankyou!
Thanks for the silver! Glad you liked it, sorry you feel like this as well when you see skinny girls x -
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well thanks for entering =]
and its just something i have to work on
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I knew you'd like the last line ;-) im glad it worked lol x
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LOve f**king LOVE the last line there girl.
Love it. And the description fits the poem perfectly. Wishing ill health on someone with something you desire.
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