The black abyss of nothingness beckons me
like a siren's song to the sea
beyond this minute...
beyond this second...
nothing else matters
no more pain
hate
nothing....
just the promise of a dark serenity
after this life...
I pray to my blade
ask it too cut a little deeper
for the pill to absorb a little faster,
for the strength to pull the trigger...
grab a bullet,
load the gun
pull the trigger...
my pain's undone,
As my blood flows on the ground
i'm filled with light
it bleaches all my sins away
leaving me with the promise
of not awakening for another day...
i couldn't live another day
couldn't face the tears this way
so goodbye i cry.
and alone here... is how i die.
Be honest... tell me what you think
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The black abyss of nothingness beckons me
like a siren's song to the sea
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WOW.....WOW......WOW....WOW!!!!! wow babe I loved it! It gave me chills. I'm glad you've finally joined allpoetry! You know I love ya! You're an awesome writer.
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okay......wow....damn...edits...i should be I in a lot of different places....I loved the grab a bullet, load the gun pull the trigger... my pain's undone....dark and desturbed, but very poetic I love you bubba...
A dozen roses for you
Blessed Be
Lauren*wilted_rose
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its beautiful in a dark and forboading kind of way. I love it...just...grr! T.T lol
Love you!
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ok i'm not really suicidal, but tell me what you think regardless... and don't tell me i need a shrink lol... because i've already heard that one and it doens't do any good k
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