There are times that I feel sad
you always know when to be there
Being with you makes me glad
you always seem to know when to dry my tear.
When you feel blue
always I will be right here
Loving you with a heart so true
and chasing away all your fear.
If I could see love
it would look like you
You are my answer from Heaven above
'cause you always know what to do.
With you there's nothing I can't do
you are the one who sets my love free
I hope that I mean this much to you
'cause this is how much you mean to me.
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By: PureRomance
Option 3: Titles (How Much You Mean To Me)
I hope I did your title justice. I've really tried on this one.
A contest entry
- Options for those in search for something new by kitsmith.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please don't critique this.
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Very meaningful sharing of the thoughts showing the strength of the love in the words around ..well done...and thanks...
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as always from the heart my friend this is a great poem and a wonderful read, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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I like the last stanza for sure. beautiful poem. thank you.
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Love The poem,
Well written =]Like always
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Good job, Joel. I think you did do the title justice. keep the ink flowing and good luck. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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Forgot those.
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Uhm, I didn't want to comment on the other one, but this one looks slightly different from what you use to write. Some of the rhymes don't fit, while still keeping the same topic, and the lines really fit with the title.
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