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Response to: Me, Without The Mask by Immortal Obscurity

Roses are red,

 violets grow from dirt.

To be open for love

 you have to be open for hurt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A contest entry

Was there to much... "assonance"?

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  • xXxIceQueenxXx
    February 5
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    Short, sweet, funny, and sad all rolled into one. Thanks for entering my contest!


  • redhanded
    November 16, 2008

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    i love this write....its kinda of sad but kinda humourous at the same time. thanks for sharing
    best of luck to you in the future and with your writing.
    andi
    (redhanded)