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thought

Where love once sighed its breath silenced the windowpane
fog forever, and ever, and ever

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 17, 2008
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    great silver

    have you gotten any where else with this?


    • Shya
      June 18
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      alas, the remainder of this poem-to-be has thus far eluded me.


  • McRae by nature
    November 16, 2008

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    Amazing thought. I really loved the language and the personification. The idea that a windowpane can be silenced, it is powerful. This is great.

    Carrie


  • redhanded
    November 16, 2008

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    aw very beautifully written.
    good job with the contest.
    and good luck.
    andi
    (redhanded)