Swept up
Feather drifting
Gravitational pull
Aviator flying lessons
Transient
Author notes
Picture
Image credit: "Wind" by: *Stefano83 (deviant art)
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A contest entry
- Contest. by PerfectImperfection.
800 points, ended December 10, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very potent piece in only 10 words, saying much with very little indeed. Thank you for your entry!
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This fits the picture beautifully, and even without the picture I would get a great picture in my mind. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing. ♥
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Pointelism in poetry
Together they capture the feeling of the image... Beatifully done.
Ken
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Outstanding
I thought this was excellent. You create a little masterpiece here with some great imagery that compliments the picture perfectly. I liked the abstract quality of this poem and the humor. Best of luck in the contest.
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i can relate to this piece. great job auntie!
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