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in a huff---------------

Not at all a bluff
I am leaving you in a huff

My expectations about your honesty and integrity
went Topsy-turvy
and poorly , my moral ideas about you went flat
deflating all my thoughts fixed in my mind about you

The soul is selling out for a drought
and heart not beating at normal rate

Not at all a bluff
I am leaving you in a huff

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  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    November 20, 2008
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    Not at all a bluff
    I am leaving you in a huff

    This was the most decisive, emotionally... now...though it may be a joke parting ways in an instant,but been fed up so there's no turning back now. I love it.

    Thank you for sharing your talent.

     

    Anna Lee