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Possessed

That beautiful being told me to pick up the knife
And how could anything that beautiful be evil
I didn't know it was him talking;
I thought the world hated me; I tought I was just a rebel

I didn't hear the Father telling me he loves me
I didn't hear him telling me to stop
I didn't understand that I was making him cry
Nor did I care at the time

But this beautiful being, this deceitful archangel

Told me it was good, that this pain was pleasure

Because he hates me with a passion

And he wants to see me tortured and die

 

I didn't know the Father was there

I didn't even think he cared at all

But now that I'm forever crying in agony

I wish I would've let him in

Author notes

Option 2

Those who resort to self-mutilation or suicide are just those who are so vulnerable to Satan, who wants to see them tortured and suffering because he hates all of us with a passion, that they become controlled my him.

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  • Almae
    December 5, 2008
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    I REALLY LOVE YOUR POEM!!
    <3STEF


  • Ryno
    November 30, 2008

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    I think you have a strong underlying message in this poem... hope in an emo poem is a very creative aspect, I would say.

    Even though you followed through with what you knew you should have tried to stray away from, secretly you knew a way out was there all along.

    Very interesting. Thanks for the entry


  • Abstract Image
    November 19, 2008
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    such a beautiful dark poem, though a little hard to read but i really liked this poem...good luck.

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