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[ a shadow ]

a shadow
outside the window
an opened book

A contest entry

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  • Lyndon gold member
    December 3, 2008

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    Simple, yet provocative. There is a great deal to ponder in this short verse.


  • poetrandy
    November 18, 2008
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    WOW!

    Very thought provoking Haiku! Best of luck in the contest!


  • DogFish silver member
    November 16, 2008
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    This is so simple ...
    why does it strike me so?!