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I miss you.

Like a fire without a flame
like a storm without the rain
like romeo with out juliet
like the dusk without a sunset

I miss you.

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just came to me while IMing with Bryan and writing a paper... its short and sweet

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  • trilobite23
    November 16, 2008

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    amazing

    its beautiful my sweet angel. I love it I love all your poems but lately they have really touched me deeply. I miss you so much and long to be with you every day. I cant wait for the day when i can say i do . I'll see you next sunday baby