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The Water Nymph

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A voluptuous and sultry sight,
she drips of stoic grace
The water nymph with mystic powers,
looking for embrace

She sets the sky a vibrant hue,
it glistens as it swirls
Inside her heart she holds the dreams,
she had as a small girl

In tuned with the salty crest,
a young man’s sheer delight
Pausing to show her precious smile,
dancing with the moon at night

Forever men do seek to find,
a treasure pure as she
She’ll tempt them in  then fade away,
into deep obscurity

A shameful lass with girlish charm,
so innocent and kind
A mixture of both want and need,
stirred by the sands of time

Yet in her life she may not love ,
she’s only meant to tease
Like the wind that blows across your neck,
a cool and tingling breeze

An ageless wonder a gift to all ,
as warming as the sun
To shine as bright as all the stars,
never to be outdone

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  • Rinoasis
    December 9, 2008

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    Interesting that you thought of a water nymph when looking at this pic. It reminded me of space instead, lol.
    Anyways, I like the title because I like nymphs.
    The fact that she was not meant to love and the mention of the wind reminds me of a femme fatale, hehe.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    Just wonderful! I love the imagery and wording in this. Your rhyme and flow is excellent.
    All the best with this
    gaylene