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The secret of life

If you have a partner,
talk to him or her.
If you haven't,
talk to yourself.
Argue the pros and cons
and be prepared to find
that shade of grey that lies
between black and white,
where you can agree to differ.

There now,
it's no longer a secret.

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  • Olivias Violin
    November 18, 2008
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    Excellent!


    • Shenton silver member
      December 6, 2008
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      Olivia

      Thankyou for reading and commenting.

      Best wishes frm 'down-under'.

      Shenton


  • poetrandy
    November 17, 2008

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    Very good one!

    You can really express yourself so well in your poetry! This one has a fine simple and honest take on the "secret of life" -- great work!

    • Shenton silver member
      November 17, 2008
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      poetrandy

      Thankyou for reading and commenting. Thankyou for your compliments. Thankyou for your very generous applause.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.
      Shenton