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Freedom Inside

The secret of life
hides deep within our souls
Which will never truly be known
until our soul is free

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Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • Olivias Violin
    November 18, 2008

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    A very thoughtful poem Thank you for sharing this


    • buffsab99
      November 19, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    short simple and to the point. Our souls indeed know our secrets to life but just knowing them is not enough. We have to act on them


    • buffsab99
      November 19, 2008
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      Thank you

      Let your soul guide you through life and will will live and learn through or trials and tribulations.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Yes.. I think it hides deep and it's a shame it shaln't be known until the soul is finally free


    • buffsab99
      November 19, 2008
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      Thank you

      I agree but knowing the secret gives us something to look forward to I guess

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