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swimming in a sea of questions
and none of them seeming remotely intelligent
why did you do it?
what were you thinking?
I know they mean well
but still, to me
they exude idiocy
and I know they couldn't understand
The scars on my wrists
and on my legs
weren't really planned
I just had to do it
so I try to ignore them
and not let them notice
what they couldn't understand
or help with anyway
But what of myself?
I can't hide from me
So I simply try to stop
and what saves me is my music
blaring my emotions
through my stereo
or with my guitar
or drumsticks
and when even that doesn't work
just let it happen
let it go
and try again next time

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i'm ladyhelenaofsorrows

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  • AllLoveIsGone
    November 23, 2008
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    wow this is the best poem i have red all day


  • Dreaming-demon
    November 18, 2008
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    Excellent poem...I can relate as well...definelty feel the emotion you put into it...well done


  • saluna
    November 17, 2008

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    Very Insightfull

    I'm going through several things my self. More or less the feelings are there. It most basically speaks for it self.
    Excellent ^^


  • lonleyteardrops
    November 17, 2008

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    omg lena i love it! its really good, but it worrys me, well i wish you the best till eternity! ily
    <3emogallhatu


  • catalyst.
    November 16, 2008
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    I loved the part about music


  • Lonely Christina
    November 16, 2008
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    wow 1st i wna say thanks 4 entering and 4 puttin ur name in authors notes lol ur the only one who listened and 4 tht im giving u applause. and wow this is my fav part "The scars on my wrists
    and on my legs
    weren't really planned" i never planned mine either and in the morning i regret so much.


  • RareFlower
    November 16, 2008
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    honesty of words. Good luck in the contest

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