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Whisper

Whisper to me

Tell me how
The world
Would stop
S P I N N I N G

If I were to
leave
just for one minute

Tell me that
your hear beats
wholly
for me.

Whisper to me

Say you wont
ever go
and leave me
alone.



I whisper back

To the dark empty air
The space where you aren't

I whisper back

You're not there
You wouldn't say those
Things
You would make those
promises


[Even if my life depended on it]


I whisper back.


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  • butterfly-ona-wheel
    November 19, 2008
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    this is quite sad tbh but really amazingly written