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Nightmares

Alone at night
laying in the dark
My soul leaks onto my pillow
as I try to avoid the visions
That I know will come again
to haunt my slumber

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Prompt: Sometimes I Cry

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Struggling to find my muse lately :(

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    So beautiful imagery and metaphor here...very deep and creative...well done...
    thank you for sharing.
    mystic


    • buffsab99
      November 19, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your wonderful comment and the amazing prompts you have been coming up with as well.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    ooo...i've felt this way...for some reason when we get to the colder seasons...i have repetative nightmares...and i know, as i lay in bed that i may be trapped in the dream again.
    I like the line "My soul leaks onto my pillow"
    good write and good luck ~

    • buffsab99
      November 17, 2008
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      Thank you

      Sins of the past get amplified in our dreams at times and come back to haunt us. The weather does play a hand in it I beleive


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    "my soul leaks onto my pillow" yes! Often how tears feel! Great write.


    • buffsab99
      November 17, 2008
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      Thank you

      I feel this way a lot latly, one day at a time

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