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Secret Seduction~

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Secret Seduction (Sonnet Style)

 

In a room with you, I’ve found my heart’s tune,

Violin’s strumming ever so softly

Underneath universal skies you swoon,

You’re my oxygen, my reality.

 

Light as a feather, wings flutter in rhyme,

Intertwining our fantasies afar

We’ll meet in the center of Love’s design,

Sharing sweet whispers upon Heaven’s star.

 

Butterfly kisses comfort painful thoughts,

Though prayerful teardrops add to pillow stains

Rivers of love wash those burdens we’ve brought,

While we’re sheltered from heartache’s windy rains.

 

Sensual fingertips caress curves right,

Loving a once lonely soul through the night.

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    January 7

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    As a minstrel would strum the strings of his instrument, so you choose your words of your write to move the heart, and soul of the reader....causing us to swoon with your words....A master with your instrument, your pen as you play softly line by line for we who read! Magnificent write!


  • PerfectImperfection
    December 18, 2008

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    Awww! That is just lovely!!! A most excellent piece of love and hope combined within devotion. Soft and nicely flowing throughout. Great form, as it complements the feel of the write well! Sensual strands woven into beauty's corner.

    Nice write!


  • penman gold member
    December 4, 2008
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    Wonderful

    So very creative and well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • sense surreal
    December 2, 2008

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    soft and sensual...

    In a room with you, I’ve found my heart’s tune,
    Violin’s strumming ever so softly
    Underneath universal skies you swoon,
    You’re my oxygen, my reality.

    I am in love with this piece...

    I like poems that speak about fingers...


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Love it! Soft sensual with such wonderful words of romance...
    Beautiful words of love from a wonderful romantic...

  • Introvert2006
    November 20, 2008
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    Another Amazing Masterpiece!


  • Three Doves
    November 19, 2008

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    Being able to see the beauty in all things gives your readers beautiful poetry. Well woven words my brother and friend.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah


  • poeticpieces
    November 19, 2008

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    So Romantic.

    Speaking your honest heart of harmony, I can read the love in each poetic piece you pen within. You here again captivate your readers, and give them a seductive treat! Great job Daddio~ Love your son, and fan, poeticpieces~


  • wildfiredreamer
    November 18, 2008

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    very nice
    sure enjoyed reading this
    blessings my friend

    Rhonda


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 17, 2008

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    wonderfully done a poem that shows a true love and more you did a great job on this, keep it flowing

  • Wandika gold member
    November 17, 2008
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    Nice

    "Butterfly kisses comfort painful thoughts," what a great line Timothy.

    Jim

  • Francis Vincent
    November 17, 2008

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    very good

    "Butterfly kisses comfort painful thoughts"
    what a great line
    honest, true, imaginative
    no hiding here

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  • AngelicMistress gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    CONGRATULATIONS!

    Tim: :F

     

    You have a gift that you share here,

    with us in AP.....

     

    This piece is very tender, love is felt

    throughout.....

     

    I thank you my dear awesome friend

    for one more piece of words from heart.....

     

    "Sensual fingertips caress curves right,

    Loving a once lonely soul through the night."

     

    Blessed be always,

    Loves and Likes,

    your friend,

    AngelicMistress...Tanya *hug*

     

    PS

    CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR NEW BOOK!

     

     


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    Lovely singing quality about this poem, Timothy - one of your trademarks - also the soft voice of love that you write so very well!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Lonely
    November 17, 2008

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    Thats a lovely poem, with some really terrific lines.. Loved your poem As Always, I dont have to tell you, Im your number one fan!

    Love,
    Lonely


  • Stardust-luvr
    November 17, 2008

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    well done hun and as you already know yes I cried by the magic of your words spoken in masterful ellogance. the lines that speak most to me are:
    "You’re my oxygen, my reality.

    We’ll meet in the center of Love’s design,
    Sharing sweet whispers upon Heaven’s star.

    Butterfly kisses comfort painful thoughts,
    Though prayerful teardrops add to pillow stains
    Rivers of love wash those burdens we’ve brought,
    While we’re sheltered from heartache’s windy rains."

    My dearest friend and brother know I love you with all my heart and soul evermore. well done and many blessings always xxxxxxxx


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    November 17, 2008

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    "..We’ll meet in the center of Love’s design..."

    What a perfect expression!!!

    M-C


  • Lily of The Valleys
    November 16, 2008

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    I Remember You

    We’ll meet in the center of Love’s design,

    This is my favorite line. I know what you're implying to, and it's a beautiful way to put it. The line where "universal skies" is implied is also stunning. When I read that I thought of numberous ceilings that you lover would see while they are... yeah. I think it's extremely sensual in the setting your poem is taking place. In the privacy of a room where to one may disturb you, and there are many possibilities.

    Anyways, i'm back on AP, and it's nice to read your poetry again. I'd applaud you, but i'm out of claps

    Best Regards,
    Holly

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  • FaerieDust9213
    November 16, 2008

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    an amazing write. very beautifully written. u have an amazing talent i just loved reading this piece it sucked me in and held me there. thank you for sharing

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  • timmkw
    November 16, 2008

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    Woah, that was so pretty. It made me think of looking up at a really starry night on a beach, for some reason. It really flowed very smoothly. It rippled off the tongue and fell quietly into my mind, just like good poetry should.

    Bravo.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Melba Solis-Z
    November 16, 2008
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    Beautiful!

    This poem is awesome, I enjoyed reading it!



  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    November 16, 2008

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    I love it weaver as i love all your work honey i think you did the norm to me as a reader of you always . tissue please

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    I love butterfly kisses! How beautiful amd soft...true words of love in lovely imagery and depth...emotions from the heart, like only you can...beautiful!
    Love,

    . Rewarded 4


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    Oh the emotion of love in this is just breathtaking Tim. Stunning word choices, as you always do. Love the picture and background to
    Gaylene


  • moon2u
    November 16, 2008

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    This is a beautiful offering of love Timothy
    delicate butterfly kisses such a sweet touch
    love and light to you Timothy
    hugs Moony

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  • Nature Song silver member
    November 16, 2008

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    Sharing sweet whisers and butterfly kisses. You are my oxygen, my breath as I breath...my existence for life. This poem is awesome, to have someone to love like this...you are blessed my friend. ~Sie

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