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The Day I died

The life he had never had No dad no mom He had no life. It was only him and his knife With out thinking he strikes himself and stabs himself 

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  • rbruce gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Brings to mind a very old saying:- I used to complain that I had no shoes, then i found a friend who had no feet.
    Count your blessings. there will be a brighter tomorrow.

  • amellowtruthaddict
    November 30, 2008

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    holy..thats not sad in anyway....my best advice is smile at your thoughts of sorrow...you know what i mean?


  • Lisa.
    November 23, 2008
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    wow i love those kind of poems but yours is the best wow