True story of a true confession of a true love ...
Let your heart and soul burn in the fire of love ..
Shhhh!!!...crying is a crime…a sin ... in love
Open you eyes when you are dead
Buried deep under
There on you grave,
You will see a wonder
There appears a daffodil...open your eyes,
Slowly..
Slowly...open more wide...
And you will see the other side,
The other side of life,
The other side of love,
Where there is no lover,
No one is a beloved,
You are but a sight,
Love is all your Might,
Hey, Almighty!!!
I Love you!!!
Author notes
this is for my friend on OP, lake of dremas , on his poem, confession, which is still not complete
Please tell me what you think
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amazingly beautiful
the repitition of certain words ,true ,slowly...... make this poem a realy melodious one nd emphasize the idea.its realy a good effort from ur side -
Nice
Nice and really superb but sir why every time its on Death, there is also life and there are many things in life on which we can write
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Thnx
Thanks for your nice comments, its not death, its actually the other side of Love and life.
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oooo this issssssssssssss veryyyyyyyyyy sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet , thanks for writing such a sweet heartfelt poem for my true story my confession , thanks you're soooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeet.
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This is very interesting, i Love the idea of it, I dont know if u ment for it to be invisible, but I like the idea of that too. Amazing imagery and you did well in provoking thought
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