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How is it?

How is it the mind wraps around seeds of decaying roots?
When a birds beak beacons the fruit from which it rests
on branches sated swaying heavy with emotion
then flies from whence it came by rowan tree
seeking out its deliverance by procuring life
while furthest from the woods of conception
rains fills the fields of contemplation
procreation of the fertile soil becomes mud in its earnest
thus to be held in the swamp of confusion
sinking in the quicksand of reality
awakened in the mire of asphyxiation

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no words allowed - these are not words they are illusions

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  • sheltered
    November 21, 2008
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    so very cool
    and original
    wow
    this will be a hard one to judge
    maybe when i'm sober


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 17, 2008
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    I think I 'get' it too...though it is pretty deep lol


  • Draig aine gold member
    November 16, 2008
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    I get it

    very wise my friend